Monday, January 30, 2012

Essay Writing Tasks

Tuesday, January 31st: Opening paragraph (Introduction) due
Wednesday, February 1st: Use all 25 of your word wall words in a sentence and find one poem to Tweet or send to me as well
Thursday, February 2nd: Third paragraph and concluding paragraph due
Friday, February 10th: Final copy due  




For this section of the magazine you are asked to write a five paragraph essay responding to 

the question: Does your novel deserve to be a part of the Grade 8 Language Arts curriculum?



To do this you must explain your position on this question using three arguments in the form of criteria as to why a novel would get chosen to be in the curriculum (i.e., engaging plot, age appropriate, deals with relevant themes for youth, rich descriptive language). This is due Friday and you will be assessed using the Grade 9 Provincial Achievement Scoring Guide which can be found at this link.

1. Introduction: 


The introduction should hook the reader in, speak in general terms about the book, and then provide a clear thesis statement or position as to whether your book should be included in the Grade 8 Language Arts curriculum. Here you should lay out the three main reasons why you think this is so.

The following supporting resources will help you:

Good Essay Format Article:

http://www.bookrags.com/articles/4.html

How to write strong openings article:


http://homeworktips.about.com/od/paperassignments/a/introsentence.htm

Passage from the link:
  1. Introduction
  2. i) The Introduction consists of an opening line that should catch the readers attention. This opening line can be a generalization about life that speaks to your topic. It can also be a quotation. Another segway into the introduction is to start it with a little anecdote (or story). By "breaking the ice" so to speak with the reader, you are luring him or her into the rest of your essay, making it accessible and intriguing. 
    ii) Once you have "introduced" the Introductory paragraph with a generalization, quotation, or anecdote, you can write vaguely for a few sentences or simply jump into the crust of the argument. 
    iii) When you feel you are ready to introduce the specific focus of the essay, then you write the thesis statement. The thesis statement should generally come at the end of the Introductory Paragraph. If you are writing about a particular book, author, or event, you should name it (in entirety) in the thesis statement. You should also list your argument with its supporting evidence in this sentence. Essentially, the thesis statement is your tagline for the essay and the final sentence of the Introduction.

2. Body Paragraph


Wednesday, February 1st: First and second paragraphs in the body due

  1. Body Paragraph One
  2. i) The Body Paragraph One should open with a sentence introducing your first argument to back up your position laid out in your thesis statement. The purpose is to lead the reader into the first piece of evidence you use to support your thesis statement, your argument. It is essentially a mini-thesis for the paragraph. 
    ii) From the transitional/opening sentence, you can go on to cite evidence to support your argument. This evidence must all revolve around a single theme and should come in the form of a quotation (or factual information from a primary source). 
    Things to consider: If you put too many different themes into one body paragraph, then the essay becomes confusing. Body Paragraph One will deal with one theme for your argument. You may have several pieces of evidence to support this one theme, which is absolutely fine. Once you use a piece of evidence, be sure and write at least one or two sentences explaining why you use it. Then, wrap up the Body Paragraph with a mini-concluding sentence summing up only what you have discussed in that paragraph.



See this article here for an outline of what should be in your body paragraph:


http://www.bookrags.com/articles/4.html


Thursday, February 2nd: Third paragraph and concluding paragraph due

See the essay writing format to ensure you have all the elements needed in your five paragraph essay. 

Friday, February 3rd: Final proof-read and revisions

Reminder of your task:

In this task you are asked to write a five paragraph essay responding to the following question: 

Write a letter to the Ministry of Education arguing for or against the inclusion of your novel in the Grade 8 Language Arts curriculum. 

Your letter must be sent to an individual or organization with the power to make decisions involving whether a novel should stay or go. Groups include the Ministry of Education, Miss Alden, or any of the admin. staff (i.e., Dr. MacKinnon, our superintendent). 

To write this letter, we will be using a five paragraph essay format and you will be evaluated using the grade 9 Provincial Achievement Test writing rubric. Note that this rubric has five criteria for evaluation including: word choice, supporting details, coherency and flow.

Responses may include:

  suspense continues to build in a way where you can't wait to find out what is going to happen next 
  an appealing character that you strongly identify with 
Now write down some ideas as to what criteria the Ministry of Education might consider for whether a book should be used in the curriculum: 
  rich use of language
  a message or theme that appeals to a broad audience
  age appropriate (reading level pushes a grade 8 reader but is not too difficult that they would give up)
Find for each of the criteria you chose (remember this needs to be criteria the Ministry of Education would use), 2-3 different examples from your book that provide evidence as to whether your book should stay in the curriculum or go. For example, if you chose rich use of language, you would find evidence that this was used in your book or evidence of writing where this was absent.




Saturday, January 28, 2012

What will your verse be?



We don't read and write poetry because it's cute. We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race And the human race is filled with passion. And medicine, law, business, engineering, these are noble pursuits and necessary to sustain life. But poetry, beauty, romance, love, these are what we stay alive for. To quote from Whitman, "O me! O life!... of the questions of these recurring; of the endless trains of the faithless... of cities filled with the foolish; what good amid these, O me, O life?" Answer: that you are here; that life exists, and identity; that the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse; that the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?

Friday, January 27, 2012

Should it Stay or Go?

Homework for Wednesday, February 1st

On your own time please either email to me or Tweet out each of our words worth knowing in a sentence. You should have a total of 25 examples. Ensure to use the word in context to show you understand its meaning. As well, find a poem that speaks to you and email this or tweet this out 140 characters at a time. See my Tweet for an example.


Homework for Monday, January 30th:


Your homework for Monday is to choose three criteria the Ministry of Education would use to determine whether a book should be included in the grade 8 Language Arts curriculum. For each criteria or feature of a good novel, you are to find 2-3 different examples from your book that provide evidence as to whether your book should stay in the curriculum or go. For example, if you chose rich use of language, you would find quotes where this was used in your book, or quotes where this was absent.

For this assignment, I am looking for specific supporting details in the form of direct quotes from your novel. Please no general statements, I need evidence.


Key features of a good novel:


1. __________________ 2-3 examples from your book:
2. __________________ 2-3 examples from your book:
3. __________________ 2-3 examples from your book:

Final Writing Task: Five paragraph essay due Friday, February 3rd
Magazine due Monday, February 6th

In this final task you are asked to write a five paragraph essay responding to the following question:

Write a letter to the Ministry of Education arguing for or against the inclusion of your novel in the Grade 8 Language Arts curriculum.

Your letter must be sent to an individual or organization with the power to make decisions involving whether a novel should stay or go. Groups include the Ministry of Education, Miss Alden, or any of the admin. staff (i.e., Mr. MacKinnon, our superintendent).

To write this letter, we will be using a five paragraph essay format and you will be evaluated using the grade 9 Provincial Achievement Test writing rubric. Note that this rubric has five criteria for evaluation including: word choice, supporting details, coherency and flow.

Begin by working in groups of four to consider the following questions:

What is your favourite book of all time?
What is the best book you have read for school?

Once you have recorded your responses on chart paper, further consider and write down the qualities or characteristics of these books. What made them so good? What are the elements of a good book? Responses may include:

  • suspense continues to build in a way where you can't wait to find out what is going to happen next
  • an appealing character that you strongly identify with
Now write down some ideas as to what criteria the Ministry of Education might consider for whether a book should be used in the curriculum:
  • rich use of language
  • a message or theme that appeals to a broad audience
  • age appropriate (reading level pushes a grade 8 reader but is not too difficult that they would give up)
Using the T-chart e-mailed to you, please choose three criteria you believe the Ministry of Education should use when deciding to choose a book for a particular grade. Please write these down in the T-Chart:

Key features of a good novel:

1. __________________ 2-3 examples from your book:
2. __________________ 2-3 examples from your book:
3. __________________ 2-3 examples from your book:

Your homework for Monday is to find in relation to each of the criteria you chose (remember this needs to be criteria the Ministry of Education would use), 2-3 different examples from your book that provide evidence as to whether your book should stay in the curriculum or go. For example, if you chose rich use of language, you would find evidence that this was used in your book or evidence of writing where this was absent.






Thursday, January 19, 2012

Task #5 Where I'm From Poem


Create a Poem for your main character-Due January 23rd
Based on the poem Where I’m From by George Ella Lyon, create a ‘Where I’m From’ list that reflects all the things that make up the identity of one of the main characters in your novel. Begin by brainstorming a list of images, experiences, sights, and smells ect. that could be used in your poem.
This poem will go on page 8 of your magazine. You will be assessed on your ability to create rich imagery using descriptive and figurative language. Use the template below as a model to create your own poem. Your poem should be at least four stanzas (paragraph in poetry) long and include at least four lines per stanza. To represent your poem I encourage you to use the following link to create an image using the words in your poem: Creating a picture with a thousand words.


Where I'm From

Where I'm From

I am from clothespins,
from Clorox and carbon-tetrachloride.
I am from the dirt under the back porch.
(Black, glistening,
it tasted like beets.)
I am from the forsythia bush
the Dutch elm
whose long-gone limbs I remember
as if they were my own.
I'm from fudge and eyeglasses,
from Imogene and Alafair.
I'm from the know-it-alls
and the pass-it-ons,
from Perk up! and Pipe down!
I'm from He restoreth my soul
with a cottonball lamb
and ten verses I can say myself.
I'm from Artemus and Billie's Branch,
fried corn and strong coffee.
From the finger my grandfather lost
to the auger,
the eye my father shut to keep his sight.
Under my bed was a dress box
spilling old pictures,
a sift of lost faces
to drift beneath my dreams.
I am from those moments--
snapped before I budded --
leaf-fall from the family tree.
-Ella Lyon

Wednesday, January 11, 2012

Task #4 Poetry in Song

Final copy due: Thursday, January 19th
Please download this PowerPoint for suggestions on how to enhance the following:
  • Opening (draws the reader in, signals the theme or topic of the paragraph)
  • Transitions (creates unity, flow, and coherence)
  • Quotes (proper punctuation, how to integrate into a sentence)
  • Word choice (using powerful verbs, more descriptive adjectives, and adverbs to enhance your writing)
Assignment
In this assignment, you will think critically about this genre of poetry by analyzing the way figurative language or poetic devices (i.e. metaphor, personification) are used in songs. Further, you will explain the theme of your song and how it relates to your book.
Assignment Layout:
1. Choose 1 song that relates to your book and possesses rich examples of figurative language.
3. The work you produce will go on a 2-page layout of your magazine. This will include key parts of the lyrics of your song, title and author along with your analysis.
4. Please provide a typed reference list with the following format.
Name of songwriter (last name first). “Song Title.” In Album Title. By name of artist or group. Name of production company. Place of publication: name of publisher, year of publication.
Example:
McLauchlan, Sarah and Peter Marchand. “Building a Mystery.” In Sarah McLauchlan: Surfacing. By Sarah McLaughlan. Tyde Music. Canada: Pierre Marchand, 1997.
  1. Illustrated Song: On your two-page spread of your magazine include images suggested in the song lyrics. These images can be drawn or computer generated.
  1. Song Analysis: This needs to be completed for the song that you have chosen.
    1. Identify the overall theme of the song – what is the author’s message? Avoid clichés and predictable interpretations by trying to dig deeper and drawing out more sophisticated insights. Ensure to develop your ideas and provide examples in the form of at least two quotes from your song to back up your interpretation.
    1. Identify at least three examples of poetic devices used in the song (alliteration, assonance, cliché, hyperbole, idiom, metaphor, simile, personification, Onomatopoeia). Discuss the effect they have within the song and why the songwriter might have chosen a particular poetic device?
i. How does this poetic device make the song better? For example, what kind of imagery does a particular metaphor create in your mind? How does this draw you into the ‘world’ the song creates? If hyperbole (exaggeration for effect) is used which is not meant to be taken literally, why might the songwriter have chosen this device?
    1. Write a personal response to the song indicating why you chose it and how it specifically relates to your novel. Your response should be at least one paragraph. Again, ensure to develop your ideas and provide at least two specific supporting details in the form of quotes from your book.
Song lyrics, in many ways, have become the ‘poetry’ of our current society. Lyricists and songwriters express emotions, make statements, promote change, and impact beliefs and value systems with the words they use in their songs.
U2
Desert sky

Dream beneath the desert sky

The rivers run but soon run dry

We need new dreams tonight


Desert rose

Dreamed I saw a desert rose

Dress torn in ribbons and in bows

Like a siren she calls to me


Sleep comes like a drug

In God's Country

Sad eyes, crooked crosses

In God's Country


Set me alight

We'll punch a hole right through the night

Everyday the dreamers die

See what's on the other side


She is liberty

And she comes to rescue me

Hope, faith, her vanity

The greatest gift is gold


Sleep comes like a drug

In God's Country

Sad eyes, crooked crosses

In God's Country


Naked flame

She stands with a naked flame

I stand with the sons of Cain

Burned by the fire of love

Burned by the fire of love
1. Find six examples of poetic devices in this song (i.e., metaphor, simile, personification)
2. What might be one interpretation of the author's meaning? What message might the author be trying to communicate here?
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Tuesday, January 3, 2012

Magazine Tasks #1-3




















Independent Novel Study Magazine Inquiry Project

Welcome Back!

By Friday the 13th (ooh) the following parts of your magazine are due:





Task #1-Create a cover for your magazine: Use this How to Create a Music Magazine Cover in InDesign (start with step 9) as a guide to complete your cover. This YouTube tutorial is also helpful (continue on with part 2). As the example to the left illustrates, ensure to include the following: Dateline, Main Image, Masthead (name of magazine), Main Cover line, Barcode (optional-but more authentic) and Cover lines.

Draw on the following sites to ensure you use copyright free images:
Press F8 or FN F8 to check the resolution
To increase the resolution of a pic up 100 place in photoshop go to image and then change the resolution number to 300.
defont is a great site to find creative fonts
To push wrapped text away from the image press command B then choose the second icon in text wrap around image then below increase the numbers to create more space between your image and the text.
To change transparency click on image, click object, effects, and transparency.
Ensure that all the images you use are at least 300 dpi when stretched to the size you wish to adopt-otherwise they will come out blurry when we print your magazine. Ensuring that you info palette is on, see this Increase the photo resolution in Photo-shop on how to check and increase resolution. As a general rule you can only increase an image by 100 dpi at the most. However, this How to make a smaller picture larger with no loss of quality tutorial can help you stretch this.
Task #2-Page 2-quote page/table of contents:
Option 1-quote: For this page you are asked to pull out a quote from your story that speaks powerfully to the main themes in your novel. Alternatively, you could also find a quote that is not in your story but also speaks powerfully to the themes in your novel.
Option 2-prologue: If you are reading a book that requires quite a bit of background information (i.e. fantasy, science fiction) for someone to understand the story, instead of doing a quote, write a short prologue outlining events that have come before the book began. This should include circumstances that form the setting of the events in your novel.
Page 3-Table of Contents: For this page draw inspiration from table of contents in Magazines in the class or on-line to create a table of contents for your magazine. We are creating a twelve page magazine and the main pages are as follows: p. 4-5-Interview, p. 6-7-Soundtrack for your book and analysis of one song, p. 8-poem for your book, p. 9-11-Feature-review of your book, p. 12-advertisement. Get creative as to what you call these sections.
See this link for over 20 examples of visually appealing table of contents examples.
Task #3: Page 4 and 5-Interview: Begin by watching this on-line tutorial to help you identify the elements to include in your spread.
Then, finishing up the work we did before Christmas, please complete your two page spread of your interview. This should include a short bio of the character you are interviewing (50-75 words) and the interview itself. For the bio focus on word choice and sentence variety. For the interview, focus on explaining the circumstances your character finds themselves in. This should be at least 400 words.
See this slide show for Four Elements to consider when designing your layout. Note in the example at the top how the questions are clearly distinguished from the answers.
Your two page spread must include: a bold title that gets the reader's attention, columns, author's name, call out (pulled out quote), and symbol at the end to indicate article is finished.

For example:

Interview with Matt Damon
Matt Damon talks to Brian D. Johnson about celebrities rescuing Africa, Harper's betrayal, and actors in the white house
BRIAN D. JOHNSON | November 28, 2007 |
Recently, People magazine named Matt Damon the Sexiest Man Alive. He was the first to scoff at the title, treating it as more of an embarrassment than an honour. Nicest Guy in Show Business might be a more fitting label for the boyish actor from Boston. With the Bourne franchise under his belt, Damon, 37, is a major Hollywood player, but he's the anti-Cruise superstar. Face to face, he seems remarkably ordinary and self-effacing. Before sitting down for this conversation, he strolled into the room, unannounced and unnoticed. Later tonight, he and his buddy Ben Affleck will hop on a private jet to embark on a fact-finding mission in Africa — where Damon is now heavily engaged in the fight against child poverty and disease.
Your interview would then go next.


You will be marked based on word choice, transitions, and sentence variety.
Along with sentence variety, the interview will be marked based on your ability to create the "voice" of your character as well as your ability to provide the background events and context necessary to understand your character's responses.
Please paste a final draft into the google doc so I can provide feedback. Each spelling or grammar mistake in your finished version will result in 1 percent taken off your final mark.

Getting started with inDesign:
There are a great deal of on-line tutorials to help you achieve the design you wish on YouTube. Here are some examples, but by doing a simple Google search, you can often find exactly what you are looking for on your own.

Overview:

InDesign Basics:
Working with Images and Objects:
Creative use of Text:
Borders and Background: